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Like Life - Part 32 - Conclusion

Wedding Rings 1
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Like Life - Part 32 - Conclusion

 

There was chaos in front of the courthouse when they arrived and both women rethought the wisdom of them being there as they walked the gauntlet of reporters.  Still, they wanted to see the closing arguments and hoped the jury wouldn’t take too long to decide, giving them the opportunity to see the verdict as well.

 

Ignoring the off the wall questions many of the reporters seemed to be throwing at them was rather difficult.  The weird theories the questions tried to confirm were laughable, if this was a laughing matter.  They made it, at last, to the courtroom and took their seats in the back row, behind the defendant’s table; that way Judy would have to turn all the way around to see them and they didn’t think her attorney would allow her to do that.

 

“You okay?”  Miranda tangled her fingers with Andrea’s.  She noticed immediately that the young woman only returned the pressure lightly.

 

“Yeah, I’m fine.”  Andy tried to smile and took a deep breath, removing her hand from Miranda’s. “I shouldn’t even be worried, it’s such a cut and dry case… she did it.”

 

Nodding, Miranda looked down at her empty hand. “Yes, the District Attorney will surely win.”

 

“Hey guys.”

 

Miranda nodded to the newcomer. “Hello, Detective.”

 

“Jo!”  Andy smiled and gave the woman a hug. “I’m so glad you’re here, where’s Blair?”

 

“Working.  She’s confident Judy’s gonna be found guilty.  She said she didn’t need to see it.” 

 

When Judy was led into the courtroom by the guard, Andy found each of her hands held; one by her fiancée, and one by her friend.  Swallowing hard, she gently untangled her fingers from Miranda’s, but squeezed Jo’s hand tightly as the wild blue eyes peered out from under the blonde bangs, searching, searching for her.

 

Miranda’s forehead wrinkled for a moment as she saw the white knuckle grip Andy had on Jo’s hand, then the light dawned. She’s afraid she’s going to hurt me again.  She patted a spot on Andrea’s thigh and left her hand there, needing the contact, the support.  She smiled as the young woman’s large hand covered hers, not pushing on it, just one hand on top of the other.

 

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They were correct in assuming the defendant would be required to face forward, and were grateful they had sat nearly directly behind her.  There had been no further eye contact since she had been escorted to her seat.  

 

The District Attorney’s summary was merely a point by point timeline of the basic facts of the case, it really was crystal clear that Judy was guilty, Jo and her partner had put together all the facts perfectly.  The surveillance equipment, the drugs in the storage facility, the acquiring a job at Runway, the coffee… all of it.  Miranda was thinking almost the same thing everyone else in the room was thinking.  Judy was so obviously guilty it felt a little like a waste of the taxpayers’ money to have a trial at all.

 

When the defense lawyer began to speak was when things got confusing.  The picture he painted was seriously skewed, much like his client.  He told the tale of two women, one the assistant to a high powered publishing titan, and one who had quit pharmaceutical school just before graduation.  He told of a friendship forged in chance meetings and passing each other in the stairwell, the laundry room, at the mail boxes… because no one could possibly live in the same building and not ever see each other.  He told of growing attraction, and when the assistant lost her boyfriend and lost her job, the two friends hatched a plan to get back at the publishing titan, to humiliate her, take everything from her just like she had done to her assistant.  Then the plan turned out to be a double cross, as the former assistant decided she wanted the rich publishing titan for herself and focused the police on her accomplice to take suspicion from herself.  By sending her accomplice to jail, she was free to take her former boss for all she was worth.

 

Andy had been so stunned on Friday when she’d realized the direction the man had taken in his approach, she couldn’t do anything but sit there and think how insane someone would have to be to believe that load of crap.  Now to have him repeating it, repeating it calmly, coolly, almost as fact…it was hard not to consider it, even for her and she knew that it was all complete fiction.  Then she felt Miranda’s hand, sliding away.  Oh God, she can’t possibly believe that… can she? 

 

A tear slipped down her face and she was glad that she hadn’t used any mascara today. Andy knew that this played on every insecurity Miranda had.  For most mere mortals it would be considered blasphemy to even suggest that The Miranda Priestly had anything resembling insecurities, or faults, but Andy knew because Andy knew Miranda better than anyone, even Miranda sometimes.  She watched as Miranda sat, stone expression not giving away anything, except her eyes, Dear God, her eyes showed such pain.  There’s more than one way to hurt someone.  Andy thought. But I’m not doing it this time… I didn’t do it… it’s not true.

 

The defense attorney sat and smiled to himself.  Proud that he’d accomplished even this much.  Before he’d been sure he was going to lose, but now, he thought he at least had a chance.  By putting doubt in the jury’s minds, he hoped they would see how it may not have just been his client’s idea, but that she could have been coerced into her actions by a beautiful, clever woman with her own agenda.  It wasn’t true, of course, Judy was guilty as sin, but he had to do something to at least try.  He hated unwinnable cases.

 

The jury was dismissed to deliberate and the courtroom filled with murmurs until most of the spectators had filed out of the room.

 

“That is such a load of crap.”  Jo was shaking with rage.

 

Miranda spoke quietly. “Is it?”

 

Jo blinked and glanced at Andy then returned her gaze to Miranda. “Of course it is.” 

 

“It sounded quite convincing.” She stared off into space. “Entirely plausible.”

 

“It’s the ravings of an idiot!”  Jo couldn’t believe Miranda was even taking one word the man had said seriously.

 

Miranda ignored Jo and turned to look at Andrea. “Is it?”

 

Reaching up, Andy gently touched Miranda’s cheek with her fingertips. “I did nothing.”

 

Turning her head, Miranda seemed to shake off her doubts and placed a kiss in the palm of Andrea’s hand. “Of course you didn’t.” 

 

Andy frowned and slid her hand up to Miranda’s forehead. “Miranda, your temperature’s back up.”  They didn’t have a thermometer, but it didn’t matter.  Pulling out her phone, Andy quickly dialed. “Dr. Dawson please.”  She paused as the receptionist asked the obvious question. “Andy Sachs, regarding Miranda Priestly.”

 

“Oh!”  The receptionist jumped a little in her seat.  She had very strict orders that calls from this woman about this subject were to be put through immediately. “Just a moment.”

 

“Andrea, there’s no need to bother…” 

 

“No Miranda, we need to tell the Doc what’s going on,” Her eyes landed on the exact spot she knew was a bruise the shape of her own hand. “It could be serious.”  Fever, easy bruising… her mind flashed back to a medical article she had once written, and the words liver failure flashed through her mind.  Andy glanced at the chair Judy had been sitting in just moments before and couldn’t help wondering if the drugs Miranda had been given might be the cause of this new problem.

 

“She’s going to want me to come in right away and give her blood, all doctors want that… and I want to hear the verdict, plus we have lunch reservations…” 

 

Andy shook her head and waved for silence. “Yes.  It’s Andy… You know the fever Miranda had yesterday, aspirin took care of it, but now it’s back.”  Andy nodded. “It was a hundred and three yesterday, we haven’t taken it today.”  Listening carefully, Andy automatically reached out to hold Miranda’s hand.  “Yes, we’ll see you then.”  Shoving the phone in her pocket, Andy turned to face the older woman.  Before she could open her mouth, Miranda spoke.

 

“You see?  Doctors… always wanting you to come to their office…” Blue eyes narrowed at the young woman next to her. “She wants more blood, doesn’t she?  Vampires, every one of them.” She crossed her arms. “It’s just a fever, Andrea, people get them.  I’m not going to the doctor.”

 

Andy turned to Jo.  “You might want to take off, this isn’t gonna to be pretty.”

 

Jo nodded and with a look akin to horror on her face, Jo stood and slowly backed away.  She was very glad the rest of the courtroom was empty as she made her escape.

 

“Miranda.”  Andy rounded on the white haired woman. “You are going to the doctor,” she held up her hand to stop any response Miranda might have made, “You are going to the doctor even if I have to pick you up, kicking and screaming, and carry you there right in front of every reporter and photographer in the city of New York!”  She took a deep breath and reached up to caress the unnaturally warm cheek. “It’s important Miranda, this could be serious.”

 

“Andrea…”

 

“No, you’re going.”  Andy was prepared to out-stubborn Miranda if she had to but she tried pleading with the woman first. “Miranda, listen to me, if I were to lose you over something like that bastard’s story,” she indicated the defense attorney’s empty spot, “It would break me.”  Gentle fingers again stopped Miranda’s response. “But, if something were to happen to you… if you are ever,” Andy swallowed hard, “…gone, and I could have done something to stop it… That would kill me, Miranda.  Do you understand?  You mean everything to me.”

 

“Andrea…”

 

“No Miranda… I mean it!”  Andy had tears filling her eyes now.  “We have to know what’s wrong!”

 

“Andrea!”  Miranda grabbed Andy’s hand before she could be silenced again. “Andrea… shhhh…” She made sure those brown doe eyes were focused on her. “…I’ll go.” 

 

Andy took a breath to continue the argument then deflated when she realized what Miranda had said. “You will?  Really?”

 

“Yes.”  The Editor stood and offered her hand. “Shall we?”

 

“We can leave here if you want, but Doc didn’t have an opening until three.”  Andy stood and linked her elbow with Miranda’s, being as gentle as possible with the woman, trying not to squeeze the arm in hers too tightly.  “I do want to go find you some aspirin though.”

 

“Yes, Dear.”  Miranda hugged the arm around hers tightly. “Lead on.”

 

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“Is it safe?”  Jo stood next to the small outdoor café table, wringing her hands together nervously. “May I join you?”

 

“Detective,” Miranda almost laughed. “You can face down a gunman with infinite calm, yet you stand here a seeming nervous wreck.”  She motioned for the woman to sit. “Is there a reason for that?”

 

“Gunmen are easy, arguing lovers… yikes.”  She smiled as she sat. “So you two have everything settled now?”

 

“We worked it out.” Andy smiled at Miranda.

 

“She threatened to physically carry me there if I didn’t go willingly… would that be considered kidnapping, Detective?”  Miranda’s eyes twinkled at the police officer.

 

Jo suppressed a grin and turned to evaluate Andy.  “Oh I think we could make something stick…”

 

Andy snorted. “C’mon.” She lightly punched Jo on the shoulder. “Don’t tell me you wouldn’t do everything you could to make sure Blair was okay.”

 

A light blush spread across Jo’s cheeks. “I would do anything for Blair.”

 

The waitress had noticed a new person at the table and quickly checked in. “Can I get you something, ma’am?”  When Jo waved her off she turned to Miranda, with a small smile and twinkling eyes. “Refill on your coffee?”

 

Miranda waved her off. “Unnecessary.”

 

Nodding, the waitress began to walk away, but kept her eyes on Miranda. “Well, if you need… anything, just let me know.”

 

Andy called after her. “I don’t want a refill either by the way.”  She turned her attention to Miranda. “What is it with you and waitresses?”

 

Shifting her shoulders suspiciously like a shrug, Miranda took a sip of her coffee.  “Honestly, to use one of your own phrases, I don’t have a clue, this sort of thing never happened before I met you.”

 

Jo laughed at that and was about to say something when her phone rang. “Polniaczek, go.” Her eyes widened.  “Okay, we’ll be right there.”  She snapped the phone closed and informed her table-mates. “Jury’s coming back.”

 

“It’s barely been an hour.” Andy was shocked. “Is that good?” 

 

Jo opened her mouth to answer, but found she had no idea in this instance if a quick verdict was good or bad and simply shrugged.

 

Miranda motioned for the waitress, who was at the table instantly.

 

“Can I get you anything else?” 

 

“We must be going.” Miranda handed the woman a bill, “This should cover the check and whatever extra is yours.”

 

The waitress’ eyes widened. “Yes ma’am… thank you!”

 

Andy linked arms with Miranda and almost dragged her away. “This flirting thing is getting out of hand… Miranda, that was a twenty!”

 

“Mmm… yes it was.” 

 

Rolling her eyes, Andy reminded the woman. “All we had were coffees!  She never even refilled them!”

 

Leaning into her fiancée, Miranda chuckled. “It’s the fever, it’s making me do strange things.” 

 

Andy snorted at that, knowing Miranda was fully cognizant of everything she did at all times, fever or not.  Even when she was being given the drugs, she knew what she was doing, she just couldn’t stop herself.

 

“I love you, Andrea.”

 

The woman’s sing-song voice made her sigh, and chuckle.  Looking down into twinkling blue eyes, Andy couldn’t help but smile. “I love you too.”

 

Jo laughed at Andy and patted her on the shoulder that didn’t have Miranda’s head on it. “You have it bad, my friend.”

 

Andy kissed the top of the warm head leaning on her shoulder and smiled. “Yep, and I wouldn’t have it any other way.”  She only just barely realized that they were walking like this, on a public street and Cassidy was going to kill them when the pictures showed up in the papers. Then Miranda made a sound, a sort of contented sigh, and Andy didn’t care where they were, or who happened to be watching, with Miranda in her arms, everything was fine.

 

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Many other people, it seemed, had not gone far from the courtroom and when the trio arrived they were unable to resume their previous seats.  So they now sat on the other side of the room, near the aisle.  It wasn’t a bad seat really, they had a perfect view of the judge, but it was very easy for Judy to turn her head just slightly and see them.  It was making Andy uncomfortable, and Miranda quite upset, mostly because it made Andy uncomfortable.  “We don’t have to stay, Andrea.” 

 

“No, I want to know what they decided.”  Andy took a deep breath. “I don’t want to run away from things, I need to face them.”

 

“Very well.”  Lacing her fingers with Andrea’s, Miranda pulled the young woman’s hand up to her mouth, kissing it lightly. “Whatever you wish.”  She found herself able to do gestures like that, kissing Andy’s hand, even in this room full of people, because for one, she just didn’t care what they thought, and for another, there were no cameras allowed in the courtroom.

 

“Oh,” Andy used her other hand to press lightly against Miranda’s forehead. “You’re fever’s down, the aspirins worked I guess.” 

 

Nodding, Miranda just smiled and turned her attention to the jury, now filing in and thought, The extra two I snuck when we were in the restroom didn’t hurt either.  She barely heard the order for Judy to stand, and almost missed the judge speaking formally to the jury foreman.

 

“Have you reached a verdict?”

 

The spokesman was already standing. “We have your honor.”  He took a deep breath and read from the piece of paper in his hand. “In the case of the People versus Judy Genero on the charge of stalking, we the jury find the defendant, guilty.  In the case of the People versus Judy Genero on the first charge of attempted murder, we the jury find the defendant, guilty.  In the case of the People versus Judy Genero on the second charge of attempted murder, we the jury find the defendant, guilty.”  He handed the paper to the bailiff who turned it over to the judge.

 

“I would like to thank the jury for their diligence in this case.”  The judge turned to look at Judy. “You have been found guilty on all charges and will reappear before this court in three weeks for sentencing.”  She banged the gavel on her desk and adjourned.

 

“So what does that mean?”  Andy couldn’t remember what the sentence would be for attempted murder.  “How long will she get?”

 

Jo reassured her. “We’ll have to wait and see what the judge decides, but for both charges, she’s looking at a minimum of forty years, could be up to eighty.  Plus the stalking charge, added to the time she’s going to serve for the Federal charges she’s been slapped with, she’s going to be nearly eighty before she even comes up for parole.”  The detective held her friend’s shoulder and shook it gently. “No worries, she won’t bother you anymore.  She’s going to spend the rest of her life in prison.”

 

Smiling from ear to ear, Andy threw her arms around Jo and quickly kissed her smack on the lips.  When she realized what she’d done, she laughed. “Sorry, I’m just so happy!”

 

Jo laughed, she knew the kiss didn’t mean anything other than Andy was indeed happy about the outcome of the trial, and tried to lighten the moment even more as she looked at Miranda’s darkening expression. “Don’t kick my ass, okay Granny?”

 

With a bark of laughter, Miranda grabbed the front of Jo’s shirt and also quickly pressed her lips against the detective’s.  “I’ll think about it.” 

 

Now with Jo wide eyed and spluttering sounds such as  ... buh… and guh… Miranda turned to Andrea. “So, do you still want to marry me?”

 

“Are you kidding?”  Andy pretended to be annoyed. “With you going around flirting with every waitress in town,” she gestured to Jo. “Kissing detectives, and whoever else just walks up off the street!?” 

 

“Hey!” Jo chuckled at the street walking reference.

 

Resting her forehead lightly against Miranda’s, Andy smiled.

 

“You bet I do.”

 

End.

 

And yes there will be a fourth story, they are getting married after all ;)


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[info]law_nerd wrote:
Sep. 21st, 2009 11:56 pm (UTC)
I could almost wish that you weren't such a good writer, because it would mean that I wouldn't care so much about this [many creative expletives deleted] cliffhanger.

Instead, I shall take calming deep breaths, thank you politely, and start a slower re-read in order to savour bits I was speeding past earlier to find out what happened next.

Oh, and Miranda "has many skills"?!? mega-ROFL.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 12:02 am (UTC)
Cliffhanger? Really? I've posted the whole thing, what cliffhanger are you referring to?

LOL... I know... Xena is my first love though, so I HAD to do something, right? :)

Glad you like the story so much.
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[info]seelyfey wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 01:49 am (UTC)
Haha! Oh that was awesome. I love all the little sweet moments you gave us throughout and especially liked the Xena nod. It made me laugh. I love your Andy and I cheered when she got back at all the reporters after the twins. I also adore Emily. I really hope you put more of her in the next story. Can't wait!
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 01:55 am (UTC)
LOL... I'm glad you liked the story.

Well, Xena is my first love, so I really HAD to now didn't I? ;)

There will be more Emily in the next story, she wasn't in this one very much simply because they weren't at the office very much. Emily is actually in charge of planning the wedding and reception, so she is in the next story a lot more. Not only at the office.

Andy is sneaky when she needs to be. ;)

Thanks for the nice comments. :)
[info]tanama30 wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 04:16 am (UTC)
wow what a great 3rd part of the series. it had everything you could ever want int a story. omg it was worth the read and i have to work tomorrow omg. loved it. can't wait for the 4th part. great job. i love this series
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 10:05 am (UTC)
LOL... I'm glad you liked it so much. Sorry you lost sleep :(

Thanks for the great comment. Losing sleep to read a story is a very nice, kinda disturbing, but nice compliment ;)

[info]styx63 wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 05:06 am (UTC)
It's a very good story and the "monster" part just give us more to read : thank you !

Nice to see the building of the relationship through events that could destroy them (or make them stronger).

The Xena nod was fun (I almost choked on my drink) and I liked how Joe and Blair were more present.

I'm happy to know that there will be, at least, a 4th story in the series.

So thank you again. :-)
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 10:02 am (UTC)
Welcome. Glad you liked the story.

I had to split the wedding off into a story of it's own because this one had grown too long, and there are lots of things to be addressed still before the ceremony.

I'm glad you didn't choke!! LOL but really, I just HAD to!

Thanks for reading!
[info]icequeen_82 wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 08:49 am (UTC)
I love your writing so much - I just sat here and read this entire story in one go! This had everything one could every hope for in a story... humour, warm-fuzzies, angst, and had me biting my nails.... in fact I'll be biting my nails until the fourth story when Miranda goes to the doctor. Glad to hear that Emily will be featured more in the next story too, though I love Jo and Blair's characters. I really can't say enough about this story and your writing!
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 09:59 am (UTC)
LOL... That you love my writing and liked the story, that's saying plenty. Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

[info]lisacorriveau wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 09:48 am (UTC)
I have so very much enjoyed your series thus far. I can't hardly wait until the wedding. Hmmm, wonder if handling the details & Miranda might just make Emily's head spin off her shoulders for good *grin* This is gonna rock! THANKS!!!!
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 09:56 am (UTC)
Thanks, I'm glad you've enjoyed the stories.

Ah yes, Emily. She does have her hands full in the next story. I think she can pull it off though. ;)
[info]elea_12 wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 04:23 pm (UTC)
just......
i have been reading your story about i don't know, the WHOLE DAY!!!man you got me hooked up. even though some chapters are short, man your a TALENTED writer!! I keep laughing out loud with the story, and man you can make my heart stop with the drama!! but i have a bad feeling on what the next series will be, especially with fever and bruising... I hope your not thinking what I'm thinking.hehehe, just a thought,

ANY WAY YOUR A FREAKING TALENTED WRITER!!!
Thank you for updating the story
hope you'll update soon...
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 04:35 pm (UTC)
Re: just......
ROFL... the whole day huh? I hope you didn't put off anything important, I get blamed for enough things as it is. ;)

No bad feelings though, no worries (they'll just give you wrinkles ;) ) Ask anyone who's read any of my longer works, I'm a happy ending kind of gal. So rest easy, m'kay?

Freaking talented, you say? LOL, thanks. :)

I'm glad you liked the story so much..
[info]xavacid wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 05:35 pm (UTC)
Miranda kicked ass!!

That was a pleasure to read (even if it took me all day!)

BTW. there was one part (earlier part) you wrote Bethany's name Beverly. At first I thought I was imagining thing, or reading wrong, that you wrote Beverly all along.. now I can't find that part though, so I just wanna let you know. Or maybe it's me being crazy. :D

Anyhow, thanks for a great read. I'm looking forward to more.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 06:12 pm (UTC)
Yep... she does have many skills after all. ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

ROFL... yeah, sorry to freak you out. Another reader pointed that out to me earlier so I snuck back in and changed it. Thanks for letting me know though. ;)

Thanks for the comments. :)
[info]radak wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 06:11 pm (UTC)
you got me there. I was hooked on your story the whole evening. It's amazing. And I hope that the fouth part will be soon. Because it was so unfair to finish it like this. Miranda must be OK! Right? [soundeng positively evil]
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 06:17 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I'm sorry about being so unfair the way I left it, but it was just a stopping point. The next story starts immediately after this one ends.

Just remember that I'm all about happy endings... no worries m'kay? It'll just give you wrinkles. ;)
[info]fan_rei wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 07:53 pm (UTC)
damn you! i passed my day reading rather than doing the mature think and work.
i worry for miranda. so it's more a bitter happy ending than a happy ending...
my favorite part : when andy and miranda kick ass ! i like joe and i loved all the squee going.
thank you for sharing.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 08:03 pm (UTC)
Ohhhh... a Damn you... LOL, nice.

Eh, being mature is over-rated.

Don't worry. It's a happy ending, the psycho is going away for a long long time, her sentence will be in terms of years, but it's so many it's just... like life ;)

I had to end it somewhere, this was the trial, next story is the wedding.

LOL... you're welcome. Thanks for reading and commenting ;)

[info]raventat wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 11:28 pm (UTC)
32 chapters. Oh yeah babe. There's nothing more satisfying than a lengthy well written fic. My hat is off to you. I will be patiently waiting for part four. Good show old man.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2009 11:40 pm (UTC)
LOL... Thanks. I'm glad you liked the story.

I'm working on Four now but it could be a while.

I don't think I've been called 'old man' before. :)
[info]itsmysecretlife wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 12:47 am (UTC)
oh my
I just spent my day reading this
something tells me I need to invest more time in catching up on the apparent backstories...
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 01:05 am (UTC)
Oh no, did you read the third story before you read the first two?

Go back to Like Andrea, then on to Like Family... they are both on Ralst's Passion and Perfection site.

I guess if you spent the day reading you liked it okay. ;)

Thanks for the comment.
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[info]atrumnoxnoctis wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 01:36 am (UTC)
*squees* That was just absolutely the most perfect way to spend a couple hours of the night! <3 ..Of course, I really should be preparing for my classes again tomorrow, but I simply couldn't resist when I found that you had another story to your series out!

I'm glad that everything with Judy has gone full circle and that Miranda and Andy can get on with their lives. I really hope that nothing's wrong with Miranda though. I mean, those fevers and bruising? That can't be good.

I also loved the way that you played on Andy's and Miranda's insecurities despite the clear love they have for one another. It adds another depth to their relationship and, to an extent, it makes it a little more realistic too. Most lovers do have little spats like that, after all!

I'm really excited to read the fourth installment you're planning!
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 02:55 am (UTC)
Sorry to take you away from your class preparation. :(

I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

No worries about Miranda, I like happy endings... :)

Working on Four, could be a while though.

Thanks for the great comments :)
[info]quiethearted wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 03:31 am (UTC)
OK, I've gotten nothing done that wasn't absolutely, positively required except for reading this but I am now working on three hours of sleep and finished at last.

Now we both know I'm not a "squee" kinda person but if I were, you'd definitely get one. I really liked this. You're very good at what you do, my dear, so don't stop!!!

Can't wait for the fourth part. I'm really worried about Miranda's health now, so get writing. I loved the whole FOL thing too. Still love those two.

Ok, I'll go away now and get to work myself. Thanks for the lovely read. My muse is well fed and happy.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 10:51 am (UTC)
LOL... sorry for the loss of sleep.

I don't plan on stopping writing. I did for a while, but I wasn't happy during that time. Writing helps make me happy.

Don't worry about Miranda, she's tough, and I'm all about Happy Endings. :)

Jo/Blair are a favorite pair of mine as well. I'm fairly obsessed with Sabrina/Kelly as well (love your icon) ;)

You're welcome. Thanks for the lovely comments.

[info]associatedbears wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 06:31 pm (UTC)
Freaking hell, that was gr8!! So much for not reading it all in one go and leaving some morsels for the rest of the week. I love this like-verse, its one of my faves, Miranda under the transfiguring power of love and a black belt in karate?....oh purr.
I now will go and get my obligatory 2 hours of sleep before work. Good writing is worth it. Well done again Gin.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 06:35 pm (UTC)
LOL...Sorry about missing your sleep, but I'm glad you liked it so much.

Thanks for all the great comments and compliments. :)
[info]bailey01 wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 06:33 pm (UTC)
Yay glad this story has an happy ending, but somewhere I knew it would be :P Yay can't wait for the fourth story: the wedding
First I was hoping it would've been in this one, but then I saw there would be another one I was even happier
Amazing story as always, will wait patientely for the next one
Good job!!!!

Loved the Xena line btw, she's my first love as well, nice to see a bit in it :D :P
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2009 06:46 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I'm all about happy endings.

The wedding is a story in itself, so I needed to split it apart.

Thanks for all the great comments.

I just HAD to do the Xena thing, really, I couldn't resist. ;)
[info]samspotsu wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 03:40 am (UTC)
I was excited when I saw that the 3rd part was posted. I went back and reread the 1st two parts before reading the 3rd installment. I read the whole thing in one sitting because it was so good. Looking forward to part 4.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 03:47 am (UTC)
Wow. I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to read it all at once.

Thanks for taking all that time to read, and to comment! :)
[info]pure_ecstasy6 wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 01:55 pm (UTC)
Oh. My. God. Sqeee, there's going to be a fourth story.. I'm excited now!

But no, seriously, when I saw you had updated this story with a third part I was stoked, and the past day all I've been doing is reading this. I loved it! Everything about it! Andy's mum was a bit annoying at first but then when she began to become a bit more accepting towards Mirandy I was cool with her.

When the theory started with Andy being friends with Judy and it was a plot for Andy to get with Miranda or whatever I was shocked, so glad Miranda wouldn't believe any of it! =)

I absolutely love how you're portraying all of the characters in this story. I love how you've added this Jo/Blair pairing into the story. It's a nice touch.

I hope Miranda's fever won't be anything to worry about?
What's going to happen next? I am eagerly waiting for your next update whenever that shall be! I can't wait for the wedding!

Thanks so much! =)
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 24th, 2009 02:28 pm (UTC)
LOL... well they are getting married. I'd just assumed people would want to hear about that... ;)

I'm glad the characterizations are working for you. Jo/Blair is one of my favorite pairings and is here to stay.

No worries about Miranda's health, she's got Andy and any doctors she needs to take care of whatever minor ailment she happens to acquire. Just remember that I'm all about happy endings ;)

Yup... working on it now. It may take a while though because of my whole 'not posting until the story is finished' policy. :)

Thanks for the great comments! :) Glad you liked this addition to the series.
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[info]brown_twentysix wrote:
Sep. 25th, 2009 06:37 am (UTC)
I loved this. I like the entire series and the progression of each story, this one in particular. Can't wait for the fourth part.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 25th, 2009 12:19 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

I'm glad you like the series so well.

Not sure how long the fourth story will take, but I'm working on it.

Thanks again for the lovely comment.
[info]curiousleigh wrote:
Sep. 25th, 2009 10:29 am (UTC)
You are amazing! I loved this story and the two before it. I can't wait for the next one.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 25th, 2009 12:21 pm (UTC)
LOL... amazing? Wow. Thanks! ;)

And also thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you like the stories so much. :)

[info]duwinter wrote:
Sep. 25th, 2009 03:45 pm (UTC)
*Sigh* Where to begin? I had read 'Like Andrea' as it came out. Was excited about the universe you had created, then I lost track of the community for a time. I've just completed 'Like Family' and 'Like Life' in pretty much one sitting. I CAN NOT BEGIN to express the respect and admiration I have for you as both storyteller and writer. The universe you have created feels so real, so natural, peopled with beings who posses flaws, foibles and character. I was going immediately from section of the story to the next and the wait between each was still too long. It is a testament to your skill as a writer that you can hold your audience enthralled the way you do. Particular things I liked in both stories are numerous. I really should, and would, if time in my personal life permitted, comment on each chapter. But here goes some highlights: Pava as an addition to the AU worlds of Mirandy. From this root we can see where Andy gleaned her internal strength and compassion. The dysfunction of Andy's family and their struggle to come to grips with Andy's choice to be with Miranda. Miranda's daughters coming to be fiercely protective of Andy the way they are of their mother and coming to call Andy 'Ma'. Miranda's struggle to separate what other's have done to her in the past, relationships and attempting to 'use' her vis-a-vie her growing love for Andy Something that likely at some point in the future will become an unconditional love, but such takes time and you have captured that reality beautifully. Andy's insecurities about Miranda and her desire to be what Miranda needs versus her fear of Miranda's powerful personality dominating her. The duality of Miranda, the 'at the office' versus the 'at home' personae. The addition of Jo and Blair and the life and love you've created for them post 'The Facts of Life'. Oh and let's not minimize the core of the whole thing, the 'Judy' plot-line. The continuation of the threat that the poisons that Judy fed Miranda having done enough damage to Miranda's systems that such things as liver failure could still steal her away and ruin the happiness the couple share, and the threat to the very end that the jury might buy the sleazy lawyers arguments and let her off really kept me on the edge of my seat. One thing I hope you might explore in later stories is that convicts (especially obsessed ones) sometimes manage to continue to practically stalk someone while in prison through phone calls, letters, gift deliveries and the like. The one question I'd like answered is who really had the surveillance hard-drives destroyed? Was it Miranda? Did Jo step in trying to protect Andy's privacy? Or was it the sleazy lawyer trying to get his misbegotten client off for lack of evidence? And, I think, my very favorite thing? One of the smaller details that makes the story so real. The fact that Miranda is with Andy before every waitress with an interest in their own sex starts flirting with her. Nothing like a wedding ring to bring around people who want to flirt. I look forward to reading the next part of this series of stories and see how you handle the wedding! And hopefully more beyond that chronicling the ongoing Sachs-Priestly household. Standing Ovation.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 25th, 2009 04:36 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for your kind words. It's amazing to me when people compliment my writing like that.

"One thing I hope you might explore in later stories is that convicts (especially obsessed ones) sometimes manage to continue to practically stalk someone while in prison through phone calls, letters, gift deliveries and the like."

LOL.. yes, that is already being incorporated into the next story ;)

I'm not sure how many stories there will be 'past' the fourth, I'm also working on an original story and will probably concentrate on that one once the fourth dwp tale is finished.

Thanks again for taking the time to read and leave such an extraordinary comment post.
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[info]kirsty1181 wrote:
Sep. 29th, 2009 04:02 pm (UTC)
too good too soon??
Having just discovered devil wears prada fic I wans't sure what to expect

but this story was sooooo good I enjoyed ever bit!!

I only worry that you've set the bar too high for my first one and that the others will not manage to compare LOL

but i look forward to part 4 with great anticipation :-)

that is all!
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 29th, 2009 04:33 pm (UTC)
Re: too good too soon??
LOL... well I'm glad you liked the stories so much. ;)

There was just a discussion on the Mirandy message board:
http://www.mirandy.co.uk/forum/index.php in the "Convert AC" topic about this very subject, setting the bar too high for a reader's 'first' story. LOL... I dunno if you're a part of that board or not but this gave me a chuckle because it fit with that thread.

I can assure you there are a LOT more Mirandy fics, some of which you will probably enjoy more than this one :) Try the Small Favors series by Harriet (on the Passion and Perfection site) or Truth and Measure by Telanu (sp?) or It's All Relative by HawkBeHere (this one isn't finished yet). Mirandy is an awesome couple and there are all manner of variations on their relationships :)

Thanks again for reading and taking the time to comment. :)
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[info]torie20md wrote:
Sep. 30th, 2009 11:23 pm (UTC)
This was great. I can't wait for the next one.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Sep. 30th, 2009 11:26 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)
[info]marygriggs wrote:
Oct. 4th, 2009 04:49 am (UTC)
I hadn't read much DWP stories before but, once I read the 1st one in your series, I just couldn't stop. You've captured them perfectly and the picture you've drawn of their romance is almost too lovely for words. I really like how well you fleshed out the twins, Andy's family and the other minor characters as well. Well done!

Thanks so much for sharing your work.
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Oct. 4th, 2009 12:21 pm (UTC)
Wow, thanks. :)

Fleshing out minor characters is a tendency I've always had, it's one reason the stories grow so long at times :)

Thanks for the lovely comments.
[info]punky_96 wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 04:13 am (UTC)
What a marathon to run in the final ten parts!!! Thank you so much for not shooting either Andy or Miranda... I would have been sooooo very upset with that!!! At least if you did... you post the whole story so that we are not left hanging too much. I can't wait to see where you'll take us with the wedding and all the lead up and back and forth-ing that will inevitably go on with them :)

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story once again :)
[info]akasarahsmom wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2009 11:54 am (UTC)
LOL...I've already poisoned Miranda, I wouldn't have had the heart to shoot her! LOL or Andy for that matter.

Yeah, posting the entire store does have its advantages. It takes longer to put the story up but at least you don't have to wait between chapters. :)

Yeah, the wedding... sigh... I really backed myself into a corner on that one eh? Now everyone is waiting for this huge event, LOL... it's a lot of pressure to have to write something like that. --looks around and whispers- at least I have Miranda's vows written already, that is a huge relief let me tell ya.-- ;)

You are quite welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :)
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